Pedring, O Pedring!

So you enjoyed the previous one, huh? Now here's an even longer one.

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Scene 1 – Dreams and Reality

Scene is introduced by the dialogue of Mina bedded with a dreamy sound effect. As the dialogue progresses, a love song will be played. Mina and Pedring (main character) are making a pact, a promise of their never-ending love.
Suddenly, Cheka, the gay owner of the boarding house in which Pedring and Rico (his best friend/sidekick) stay, enters and wakes Pedring up from his dreamy state. He tells Pedring off for having to have someone else wake him up every single morning, and for not paying his dues on time.

NARRATOR INTRODUCES DRAMA PROGRAM “PEDRING, O PEDRING”

Scene 2 – Rico the Sidekick

Pedring goes down the stairs and enters the dining hall of the boarding house. He is greeted immediately by Rico, his best friend and school mate. They talk about usual student stuff. The two speed off to school in Rico’s car next. As they reach school, Rico transforms into an almost-always-English-speaking person, to level with his girlfriend Daphne. Rico goes to the canteen to meet up with Daphne, leaving Pedring alone walking to his classroom.

Scene 3 – Waving Mina, Raging Bongga

Scene starts with Pedring noticing a familiar face, Mina’s, waving at him. He thinks it was really him who Mina waves at and waves back at the girl. A group of girls comes in and greets Mina, who the latter was really waving at.
Pedring gets humiliated and starts talking to himself.
As he just was, Bongga, another gay character who calls himself Janno Gibbs’s fashion consultant, answers Pedring’s last question. They start off with quite a rough introduction and warm up to each other a bit more as the dialogue progresses. Bongga volunteers (as he says, no consultation fee) to give Pedring a fashion and attitude makeover to make himself more noticeable by Mina. Pedring is doubtful at first but gets convinced in the end all the same.

Scene 4 – The Makeover

Buses and busy streets sound effects come first in this scene. Next, Pedring and Bongga head to a mall and shop for clothes and accessories after having a bargain that Bongga picks Pedring’s clothes and gives him sound fashion advice for free, and Pedring pays for everything he shops for. An upbeat music sneaks in after the dialogue.

Scene 5 – Daphne Enraged

Rico starts the scene with his dialogue in conyo accent. Daphne starts complaining about how long they’ve been waiting for Pedring to show up. Pedring arrives at the place, the other two tells him off for being late. Pedring introduces Bongga to them, and they all head home afterwards.

Scene 6 – The New Pedring
Pedring shows Rico how Bongga helped him earlier and Rico gets impressed by how skilled Bongga was at doing makeovers. Rico jokes about turning gay over Pedring’s new look. Pedring asks him if Mina would start noticing him with his new fashion and Rico agrees. Pedring wonders how easy this is, and how it turns out like a dream-come-true.

Scene 7 – Dreams and Reality 2

Scene is introduced by Mina and Pedring’s dialogue. Mina starts talking to Pedring. The latter gets excited. As the dialogue continues, he finds out that Mina doesn’t like him at all and calls him a loser for trying hard to make her notice him. Pedring gets depressed – and mad at Bongga for fooling him into doing the whole makeover.
Pedring is woken up again by Cheka, and it turns out it was just a horrible dream. Rico catches up with him and says he had a bad dream last night. But Pedring, in his already bad mood, shuts him up – so Rico never gets to tell him what his bad dream was about.

Scene 8 – It’s Mina, for real

The two guys arrive at school and split up. Pedring spots Mina and decides to walk up to her, just to test if Bongga’s help really worked. He finds out Bongga did him a great favor. He asks Mina out to dinner and she agrees. The whole dialogue is bedded with a love theme.

Scene 9 – The Real Mina

Pedring is at the decided place of meeting exactly on time. He waits for ten minutes, thinking maybe the whole thing was a joke Mina and her friends played on him. Then Mina arrives and his suspicions relieved. Mina apologizes for being late.
The love theme (same as played during the entire production) sneaks in.
Mina says that she’s got something to tell him, and Pedring gets excited. They become officially on minutes later, after confessing love for each other. But Mina still has something else to tell Pedring. And Mina reveals to him she’s not real girl. She is gay.

Scene 10 – Pedring, O Pedring

Fast-forward to sometime in the very immediate future, back in the boarding house. Pedring tells Rico the whole story, and Rico consoles him. Rico reveals that what he had dreamed of days ago was exactly what things turned out to be. He had dreamed of Mina as being a gay cross-dresser. Pedring continues to whine.

NARRATOR ENDS DRAMA PROGRAM “PEDRING, O PEDRING”

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That was a drama scenario treatment paper.

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I didn't have time to correct the grammatical errors before I posted this. Sorry about that.